写雅思作文的水平怎么样?
能写代码写作业,能编剧本能做题,甚至还能代写辞职信……最近爆火,频频登上热搜。上线仅仅两个月,的活跃用户就突破一亿。
科技的突破性发展可能影响我们每个人的日常生活和工作。以我们熟悉的雅思教学为例,老师们已经开始担心:如果学生用写作业,我们该怎么办?
所谓“知己知彼,百战不殆”,在学生“动手”之前,我们自己先试一下,给布置一个题目,它会写作出符合雅思评分标准的文章吗?同一个题目问两遍,它会给出相同的回答吗?
题目
It is for the to in than to in and other games. To what do you agree or ?
01
回答
I agree that in is , but I also that in and games can have as well.
One for in is that it can help and , and also for , , and goal-. This can have long-term for their and well-being.
On the other hand, in and games can also have . These can bring and a sense of , and a sense of . They can also have , such as and local .
, I that both in and in and games are and be by the . It is to a and in , and and .
In my , the in both , and in a way that best meets the needs and of the . For , if a has to in , the may in , while in with a , the may .
点评
Task
得分:6.0
点评:给出了观点的原因,但缺乏具体的论证,尤其是例证。
and
得分:7.0
点评:分段正确,逻辑清晰,衔接流畅,衔接词使用多样且自然。
得分:7.0
点评:词汇使用自然、准确、有许多不常见词汇,有许多符合语言习惯的搭配。
GRA
得分:7.0
点评:语法准确,句式多样,标点符号使用正确。
综合
综合四项评分标准,这篇在30秒左右写出的雅思作文可以得到6.5左右的分数。但因为字数不足(240词),会有一些扣分,最终得分预计在6.0左右。
不得不说,6.0-6.5已经是很多学生梦寐以求的雅思写作分数了。信手写出的作文,也有很多值得我们学习的地道表达。
这时,我们也不禁产生了疑问:如果我们的学生都用写作文,会写出一模一样的文章吗?于是,我把同一个问题,又问了一次。
02
回答
As an AI model, I do not have or . , I can both sides of the and . the , both in and in and games have their own and .
in can help life such as , , , and goal . , in can also help to and , , and the risk of and other .
, in and games can also have . These can bring , a sense of , and for . , games can also have , such as and local .
In , both in and in and games have their own and . The to which one is over the other on the needs and of each and the of the . A that both and could be the most .
乍看之下,给出了一篇完全不同于前作的文章,只是这篇文章的字数更少(211词)。但如果仔细阅读,不难发现,两篇文章有很多重复的短语和表达。如果有两位不同的学生交上了这两篇文章,那就很值得怀疑他们是不是借助于AI了~
不得不承认,的批判性思维能力还是让我们大吃一惊,甚至已经超过了不少没有受过训练的大脑。
但真的能代替我们的思考吗?目前看来,它的论证还是趋于空洞,充满套路,与优秀的写作者还是有很大的差距。
包括写作能力在内的诸种能力都有赖于我们日复一日的练习,也许可以快速的给出一个答案,但我们可能因此失去探索的乐趣——而人类文明的内核之一就是坚持不懈的探索。
当曾经超现实的科学技术慢慢进入我们的日常,我们更需要珍视我们自身从阅读、写作和学习中培养的思辨能力——“给岁月以文明,而不是给文明以岁月”。
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